Friday, October 2, 2009

Haiku 2

Deep thoughts
I think that I shall
Never see a haiku as
lovely as a tree.

Challenge
What topic should be
The topic for next haiku?
Suggest and stump me.

Note: Haikus amended due to my inability to count to 7 (as caught by an observant reader--good eye, Stacia!). Whew. Friday was a loooong day. :)

2 comments:

The Lady of the Holler said...

Um, I think you have
One too many syllables
In your second lines


My topic for you
Is to haiku about tubes
Good luck with that friend

Laceys said...

Haiku, I like you
But limericks are my thing
You can't sing haiku

Punctuation marks
Do not fit in haiku verse
Maybe at the end?

Poems that don't rhyme
Are like Pablo Picasso
Images I think